shade-v2's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Responsibility]

He's Got Christmas Eyes!

Pretty nice little submission. I wish more "first submissions" were this good. Keep it up - learn more.

RegisCartoons responds:

Yeah, I know that you mean bay saying "He's Got Christmas Eyes". Now I know how to make twinking random. I'm learning. Thanks

[Dragon Ball Infinite::Pre]

Excellent.

This is some great fbf and an excellent way of spinning the aging DBZ genre into something new and worthwhile.

I especially liked the way you did the fully framed exploding landscape shots. Very stylistic.

There is room for improvement in the character shots. You either need to do more inbetweening(time consuming, I know) or simply work on getting the few frames you have more similar to each other. This suggestion is specifically for the choppier moments.

Actually makes me think you might have done this with a mouse instead of a tab. If that's true... well... damn, man... damn! ;)

Katoblade responds:

I drew everything with a mouse lol

thanx for the review

[21: 08.00am- 08.03am]

Not bad.

Using flash 4, eh? Well... Whatever you have access to, I suppose.

Anyhow... This piece was pretty good. The charecters were well drawn and some time was taken to make lip movements look semi-synced. Theres a lot of room for improvement but altogether it's pretty good.

Suggestions: Basically, all I would say is continue to mess with different styles in flash. Play with shading techniques and try to avoid using the shape tools(making a wall or building with the box tool tends to look pretty hacky).

Spend more time on your backgrounds - maybe draw up a few more poses for each charecter so they look more animated.

But, like I say, really all this artist needs is time to develop a more expansive relationship with the techniques and capabilities of Flash.

Friz responds:

Episode 6 and 7 (the finale) are made with Flash MX. This is my first attempt at a series, and hopefully it will be recognised as one at Newgrounds... *hint*...

[Ah! Mr. Schultz! - 01]

Finally...!

This is an excellent short. The best I've seen in a while. And just to be clear, let's run down the list of why it's a good short.
(Maybe some of you can learn something)

Fluent animation, excellent quality audio, low compressed file size, a mainly original concept, and apt use of personal artistic style. Oh... and of coarse - mentioning Sealab 2021 in the comments. I'm so happy to find that I'm not the only one who enjoys that show, I may have given this piece a 5 just for that.

raitendo responds:

hehe, I was just watching Sealab, I love it, it's even better than Space Ghost & Birdman - Attorney at Law. Adult Swim forever!

[{{CLOX}}]

Awwwwwwww... isn't that: stupid.

I actually had to watch it twice because I couldn't understand why anyone would make a movie about members of the clock crew joining together in pursuit of Cake.

Of coarse, once I realized this was the end of the movie I couldn't help laughing at it's uselessness.

Plus I liked the style of the lines - not unlike Dr. Katz were it played at 50fps?

dandandan4 responds:

UHH LYKE.. KTHXBAI.